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Personal
Description
The scene shows two-person talking about personal
Comments
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Bernard Ting
the girl look too angry
Charlotte
The staging is nice, the animation would need just a bit of refining.
Jason
I like the set up and context a lot, the animation overall looks really good, there's just a few places where it looks lie the characters 'freeze' for a second. Not sure if that was intended but if it was, just try adding a little bit of movement so the sudden pause isn't so jarring