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Long Drive
Description
A Friend is waring of the dangers in the further journey.
Comments
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Jon Coppock
More overlap, things happening all at once on the poses. Lacks follow through and secondary action.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange
The guy's hand movement on "Don't cross the stream" part is too snappy..
Craig P. Smith
On the first line with the blue man, and the last line of the green man, you have them make a gesture when their hands are right in front of their faces. It seems like you could easily just move the arm so the gesture happens of the the side. Makes a better silhouette.