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sadboys playing computer game's.
computer guy name's aa, he is so stupig and he thoght he had it
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Cameron
Right character's movements don't match what he is supposedly saying
Zoe Piel
Too many hand cliches. They don't add anything and are distracting from an otherwise good performance.
Casey Colledge
It might help if there were about 40 empty cans of red bull next to red shirt. He seems pretty wired.
Derek Stewart
Some cool poses in this, but they don't really make sense for the shot. Keep working at it though as I see some nice ideas.
Shark Bait
It was alright until the animation went too over the top
Yuri Marcel Vieira
good one, but the last expression of the character in the red shirt breaks the lip sync
Matthew Kenyon
Try moving like the red character does and speaking the line.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange
I dont understand the concept..
Craig P. Smith
Yikes. The guy in the red shirt goes through 4 wacky poses/expressions in a second or two. I love the expressions, but it seems a bit too scattered and rushed. It looks like even a cartoon wouldn't do that.
Otherwise your command of animation and lip-syncing seems to be really good.
Douglas Fletcher
First half is good, poses at the end let it down
April Slocombe
Good animation for the most part. The only issues are the man in the red top smiling when I don't think he should be and his movements during his last line are excessive but he also pulls a funny face.
Wolfgang Haas
looks great, but your characters don't actually have to act out everything they're saying