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THE WARNING

by Romane Biamby

Final Rating: 3.15. Finished #143 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

Romane Biamby

Experience

Student

Time Taken

Two Weeks

Description

Your critic matter.

Comments

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Cameron

Needs a lot of work on lipsynch

Garrett

Nice idea! Wish the framing allowed us to see the character inside the TV more though. I also wish the acting wasn't so symmetrical a lot of the time.

Mervyn Le MandarinOrange

The hand action should be offset a little..

Craig P. Smith

Looks like a good start, but I don't read the scene. What streams are they talking about and why do each of them feel the way they do about it?

Kristin Turnipseed

Looks like it needs more passes and the camera jumps a bit too much. I like the idea though

hamid

it's compleletly pose to pose it shouldnt be make it more straight ahead less tween and not all thing come together at the same time also see the eyes and eyebrows they are looks tweening too also give the head perspective it's make your animation not flat

Janice Liu

cool idea! lip sync needs work..

Sophie Bracmard

The animation need work and the acting isn't really natural.

Wolfgang Haas

You have too much indicating going on, I fear.