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Why not to cross the streams?
by Bachi
The male deer teaching his child the dangers of nature (Sorry I couldn't make an appropriate finish version, but I didn't have much time.)
Comments
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Cameron
Need more animation overall. Characters feel very static.
Garrett
Aside from the alligator at the end the animation feels very stiff. I think it would benefit from some more movement.
I like the idea a lot! And the framing works well!
April Slocombe
Lovely drawings and subtle movements but the lip sync could be more detailed and the bigger deer remains static while the younger one says his last line. Nevertheless I like the crocodile/alligator coming out of the stream at the end.
Lance Erickson
The animation in this one seems to be too rigid and stiff.
Daniel Roldan
Give them more body movement; make them talk with the body so they seem as if they were alive
PRIYA RANJAN DEB
very nice story...