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Pirates (crossing the stream)
by Ze Alexandre
I whish I didn't start so late, but that's it for this month! ;)
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Derek Stewart
Nice work! This made me chuckle by the end. The shipmate has particularly good reactionary acting. The captain is maybe a little over-the-top and doesn't seem to know what he's doing, but this is a start to a pretty great piece. Keep polishing!
Craig P. Smith
Very nice feel. Good appealing motion and animation.
Nice mixing up of the posing on the captain, but it looks like it's just a pose for pose's sake. I doesn't really define the character. I have a hard time telling what the captain is feeling/thinking.
Kalpesh Patel
it can be improve by giving proper timing.
Caelan
My personal favourite and i watched and rated all of them.
Very good acting and natural poses. I would unfreeze the character at 145 though cause he seems to freeze almost completely stiff for a couple of frames. Other than that this animation was just awsomely done. Even the eye darts are done very well. it looks like you put in a lot of time and effort and it really shows through. You should give me some tips.
Alexis Dounce
Nice animation in general, but the character with the hat stays too much time in the same tense position. It feels like it just freezes, I think it needs to relax a little after that position, and then stay there, maybe play with the eyes a little or blink. Right now the tense position feel so weird that distract you from the animation of the other guy.
Victor Pierce
Love the expressiveness of these characters! When the guy freezes after 100 frames, I feel like he should at least be blinking or showing some sign of life.