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A friendly warning
Dont cross the Streams, you don't want to see them when they're angry.
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Kayla
Funny idea! Made me smile, something the audience is not expecting.
Derek Stewart
Finally... a fresh spin on a waaaaaay overused concept. I dig the quick nods as he closes the door and then quickly opens. That was nice! The shot of the green-shirted character feels a little off at this point. I'm not sure what's going on with that swooping head move, but it doesn't quite work. But again, great idea here and I appreciate the fresh take on the obvious direction.
Jaime Colque
creative
Jan Abero
I Did not see that coming. Kudos.
VieEik Thong
sound?
Cidos Daar
FUNNY XD
Luke Bridger
all round great. well timed, nice polish, good acting, the only thing that stands out is the second shot breaks a camera rule and this is disorientating
Héctor
Very funny!
Cale Royer
The animation is top-notch, I just wish you hadn't broken the 180 rule! It's quite jarring.
Kalpesh Patel
looks good ..need more detail..
Janice Liu
love that head nod lol!!
Blond
Whoa I like the ending.
Eric Buval
I really like the quick sarcastic head nods at that middle part. I get what you're going for with the calm sarcastic guy but you could've pushed some of his movements more.
April Slocombe
A couple of choppy head movements on, "Don't cross the streams" and "Why?" Other than that, the lip sync and the set-up are good, no actual peeing is shown (this has been done in quite a few entries already) and I like the revelation of the tough-looking 'Mr Streams' at the end - very funny.
Isai Calderon III
HAH! The Streams.
Focus on the eyes, they are a tad floaty.
As for the Streams, when Blue walks into the bathroom they are right in front of him. Maybe have them coming out of the stalls?