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Jump the Stream
About 2 years or so. Coming back from a near decade long hiatus.
2 to 3 weeks from scratch.
A squirrel, named Jumpy, sees a giant delicious acorn on the other side of a stream,. A rabbit pops out of a bush to tell him not to cross the stream.
Comments
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Cameron
Nice animation overall
Craig P. Smith
Very good on the lip-syncing. That's the strongest part of your scene. The motions need to be cleaner and more believable though.
April Slocombe
While the movements are subtle, I like the cute character designs and the lip sync. Some more colour would have been nice as well.
Janice Liu
like that facial expression at 164 lol maybe some eye twitching would be funny to add to the movement
Linh Diep
Best part for me was the timing of all. It felt right. I really like how you put thoguht in the follow through with the ears and tail but maybe it was a little too much? (especailly the frames 41-72)