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Candyland
Description
An elf tries to warn his friend.
Comments
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Cameron
Lipsynch needs a lot of work. Try not to hide characters' faces when they're tallking.
Michael Minasyan
no emosions
Yuri Marcel Vieira
the young character almost don't look at the old one, he should keep eye contact sometimes
Jaime Colque
you should select the colors better but the animation seems good
Joel Murphy
blink.
April Slocombe
The older man could have turned his head on "Why?" Other than that, the animation is good on the whole and I like the ending of the younger man falling in the stream.