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awaitor

by behrouz

Final Rating: 3.62. Finished #125 out of 169 entries.

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Animator

behrouz

Experience

1.5years

Time Taken

6days

Description

an unexpected rating

Comments

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Cameron

Needs work on staging. Lipsynch needs a lot of work.

Brian Rusnak

Hey there! Your scene looks really nice and well-polished but your animation seems a bit "floaty" at times. Work on your timing to snap things up between your poses. Also watch your staging and camera movement, especially around frame 228.

Jan Abero

Some of the motions look to floaty so watch how your timing and spacing.

April Slocombe

A lot of the movements are floaty and the lip sync needs more work but good poses otherwise.

Kristin Turnipseed

Some of the movements could be tightened up and the lip sync needs a lot of work

Jaime Colque

I saw many with the same character :/