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11seconds
by jiajun wu
Mother who loves alcoholic
Comments
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Sabrina Winkel
The mom moves too much and the 2nd character needs to talk
Marcella D.
Put lip movement on the daughter
Jordan Lewers
Nice staging and expressions, but there are a few too many poses for such a short amount of time. That being said, Mery would do well in the rap industry
Gaucelm De Villaret
Feels too jittery for credibility. Sometimes, less is more. Also, some more finesse and balance.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Jelany Andujar
good animation! but maybe next time try and not have her moving her arms like that (girl with the gray shirt) freaked me out a bit. overall keep it up