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I Didn't Do That...

by Kaylee Banco

Final Rating: 3.38. Finished #192 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Kaylee Banco

Experience

3 Months

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

Final project for the DAVE School in block 2.
Mery rig is from MeryProject.com and Nurnie rig is from The DAVE School.

Comments

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Sarah Schulze

The idea is nice! Maybe you want to push a little bit more your posing. Do not forget your silhouette! :)

Bounthavy Sananikone

The movements are very robotic in the sense that it feels like there is no emotion there. It doesn't have to be sporadic but it needs more polishing. It helps to possibly act out the situation on your own to see the difference.

Marcella D.

Animation could improved

Sabrina Winkel

Nice!

Maryline Chemoula

I love your uses of props ( when Mery handles a different drink) but the movements are kind of even in rhythm. It wouldn't hurt to make things move with different tempos

Gaucelm De Villaret

Too slow and lacks energy. The actions are hardly related to the dialogue and its effects - or at least they don't feel so to me.

Fernando Incetta

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

Moby

Reactions need to be a little stronger