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Bitter!
by Lim Qi Wei
Girl having a drink offered by lady
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Appropriate... Respectable.... It's good interpretation, and is fitting... It lacks maybe a bit of something more wild, but maybe it shouldn't...
Ramon Arango
i think you could exaggerate the posing and speed of certain motions. Now it has a very monotonous flow to it. Make things snappy, fast and slow or even do some holds. Some variety and contrast in motion is always nice
Keely Imai
Love the leg swing!
Marcella D.
Not bad
Jose Virgil
I liked the laugh a lot and the motioning to the house. The hand is very floaty.
Fernando Incetta
Good posing body language. It could use some extra refining though. Congrats
Monica Stringer
the eye movement on the mum at frame 199 is waaaay to fast, smooth that bugger out