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Cool Mom

by David Jordan Cox

Final Rating: 5.10. Finished #41 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

David Jordan Cox

Experience

1 Year

Time Taken

11 days

Description

A mother tries to show her daughter, how great the 80's were by taking her to an "old school" bar.

Comments

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OceanicBoy Joey

Idea is cool but still can improve on animation

Gaucelm De Villaret

A strange interpretation, though fun in some ways... But still, unfitting/inappropriate. The movements may be wild and exaggerate, but it lacks solidity and credibility. There are some good positions, but the transitions are not quite there yet.

Sabrina Winkel

Good acting

John Michael Wilyat

But why would she love the 80s? I'm confused. The technical aspect seems to be there. Just work on your storytelling so you can bring more clarity to your intention.

Connor Leuck

I like the exaggeration of the mom. When doing the dance though, her ribcage needs to be affected by her movement as well.

Marcella D.

Not bad

DarkFenix

Hahaha... that dance are really funny.

I think you should maintain the finish pose of the dance until the surprise.

Joel Cisneros

haha funny

Richard Adams

lol. Love the poses and facial expressions. Polishing stage needs work.

Fernando Incetta

Funny, nice toon approach. Mom stays still a little bit too long in the end. Good job!