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Mother and Daughter!!
by Amrithraj
Mother hides Liquor in a cola bottle,and her
Daughter accidentally drink it.
Comments
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Andrei Llacuna
the lighting somewhat creeps me out
Keely Imai
Looks nice! The movements of the camera are okay, though the fade transitions don't really work for me wth the quickness of the action. Perhaps a quick side pan following the mom to the girl would work better to communicate that the mom traveled from the couch? Otherwise, good!
Marcella D.
Why is the scene shaking? Make sure everything works properly before exporting/playblasting your work.
Charlie Abb
Lip synch a little off. Good concept and characters.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Kudos for some audacity! It has energetic camera work, which by itself lends energy and expressiveness to the action. The portrayed physical contact adds even more emotion between the characters, and the facial expressions are quite top-notch. I could go without the fade cuts, though.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. The camerawork needs a lot of refinement too, check references if you need help. Good luck.