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Alchohol
it's first time.. hope this is ohk for starting (detailing is remaining).
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Tight camera angles that overstay? No no. Slow constant movement? No no. Give it more energy, show more.
Craig Joseph Massa
Not a lot of lip/mouth movement going on, needs improvement there. the movements of the characters are stiff. Also, the mother's eyes don't blink at the same time? I don't know about you, but I'm pretty sure humans blink both their eyes at the same time. Otherwise they look like a chameleon.
John
Something you could improve on is facial movement. The eyes and eyebrows don't really move. Try over-exaggerating things and then toning it down.
Marcella D.
Needs improvement
Hannah
more emotions please
Monica Stringer
last bit of dialogue is fast so animation has to be tightened up. Also facial expressions need to be more diverse with more blinking
Ariyanto Zulkifli
the animation si too stiff.