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vampdrunk

by William Garibay Romano

Final Rating: 2.53. Finished #264 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

student for ...a while

Time Taken

have been working on this 3 or 4 days i got hurt culd not continue as i wish i could

Description

this mother vampire teaches her aprentice the ways of the nigth ...the friday nigth

Comments

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Michael Whitley

I like your idea, guess you just needed more time

Marcella D.

I would love to see this finished

Gaucelm De Villaret

Maybe you have a cool idea, but you can barely see the execution here. There isn't animation, it's more of an animatic.

Richard Adams

Terrific story idea, just feels very unfinished in execution.

Rebekah Ryan

The idea is clear and I think its an interesting way to approach the quote! The arm movements are a bit jerky to me but the addition of a couple of more inbetweens could remedy it.

Monica Stringer

as for a completed animation... this is not one. Rough draft? yes, and a promising one. I'm a bit disappointed I didn't get to see what this could become.