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Conversation
by Shree Bhat
A short conversation between mom and daughter.
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Too stiff and robotic.
Sabrina Winkel
Needs improvement. I only like the scenery.
Lechard P
needs more fluid movements
Marcella D.
Character movement is way to stiff, and awkward. Please fix that.
Melanie Sanchez-Matos
Your models' movements are very stiff, especially the mother after she laughs. She doesn't blink once which is very unsettling. Lots of attention should be dedicated to their posing on the next submission. The lipsynching is also off for both characters when they say certain words. You have a good taste in backdrops.
Monica Stringer
body movements need to be a bit smoother