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Alcohol
by Aldric
A mother and her daughter with an alcoholic drink?
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Fun enough expressions and acting. Good setup. However, the superfast motions are a bit sickening.
Sharkhead
Too much exagerated
Sarah Schulze
Nice posing. Love the "cause if you wanna drink it" part. Maybe before she says "oh god honey no" ,she should just move her head to the right like she is checking what the girl is doing :)
Steve Schwartz
I like the small movements but those big, exaggerated ones go just a touch too fast. They're like Tex Avery fast but without the smears. I would slow them down just a touch.
Mark Hanson
snappy
Craig Joseph Massa
A little quick at times, but good quality overall!
Connor Leuck
The mother's surprise is just too surprising. It could use some anticipation before that initial action and perhaps an acknowledgement of the girl talking.
And the mother's right shoulder should relax at the final pose.
Fernando Incetta
Interesting toon approach. It still needs refining but it has a lot of potential. Good job
Ariyanto Zulkifli
too much movement