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11seconds
by Moises Horta
mary and her daughter
Comments
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Maryline Chemoula
Love the idea but Mery is floating too much. and the other character doesn't move at all .It's sad because this animation could have been great. Keep working on it please ! :)
Deanna Keogh
Animation is too slow... Work on adding keyframes in between poses
Sabrina Winkel
Lip sync needs work
Steve Schwartz
Movement is really floaty, especially at the end
Marcella D.
Needs improvement
Gaucelm De Villaret
Did I see this one before? Anyway...
The "kid" is completely still? What the?
THe "mother" is quite unbalanced in her movements. As she jumps, she is doing unnatural smooth movements as if she was modeling for a fashion ad... this isn't exactly what would be believable for a situation like this.
Terence Staples
Lip sync wasn't articulate. Starts being a bit floaty towards the end.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Ariyanto Zulkifli
the animation is floaty and the kid is too stiff.