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Egg Hunt
by Charlie Abb
A girl asks her mom if there's alcohol in the candy eggs that her mother is laying out for an Easter Egg hunt.
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Gaucelm De Villaret
This could work, although in its own context, it feels more weird than creative... Obviously, you were influenced by Easter coming up lately... Don't let it influence you... Anyway, the movements don't feel that expressive and there is still this "gliding" quality that are not quite there yet.
John Michael Wilyat
LOL
Marcella D.
The daughter movement could be worked on a bit more
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.