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In the moon light on a yatch
by jobygeorge
In the moon light on a yatch having a wonderfull time without liquer
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Ramon Arango
great body mechanics I think. You nailed the daughter but Im not sure about the mothers face. The lipsync feels spliny and very hesitant. Dont be afraid tt go into more extreme poses for the lips. Acting wise I get kind of a sexual vibe in the end. It just feels too intimate.
Marcella D.
Not bad.
Jose Virgil
the action around 130 seems a bit delayed compared to the audio. darn good though.
Daniel Ramirez Bastidas
Great! But, creepy..
Isaac Holzwarth
the animation is good, but I'm not sure the expressions quite fit the dialogue.
Naga Anim
Nice
Fernando Incetta
Good work! Pretty fluid. The lip sync is a little bit off, though.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Has a nice idea, but there isn't enough expression to make it all well...