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mum and daughter

by Yongliang Zhao

Final Rating: 5.82. Finished #22 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Yongliang Zhao

Experience

4 years

Time Taken

10 days after work

Description

they are cooking

Comments

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VanG

First decent animation I've seen so far. I love that arch motion at 142-146

Sharkhead

Really cool!

Rachel Col

wowowow, such fluid movement!

OceanicBoy Joey

cool!

Bounthavy Sananikone

Pretty good but I feel the mother's movements are contradictory to the daughter's reactions. Something feels off.

Marcella D.

Not bad, but proper texture, and light would help this a whole lot.

Robert Firestone

Solid animation here. Not crazy about the choice to have mom shove a grape into the girl's mouth, and I think you could have playblasted at a higher resolution.

Jose Virgil

i dont understand the gestures well, but great animaiton

Fernando Incetta

Good work! Try to push facial expressions a little bit more, most of it in mom's eyebrows. Congratulations

Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui

brilliant i think in top 3 !

Bokang Koatja

Love the kid's reactions! Mom's movements are a little too exaggerated I think :) Good job!

Connor Leuck

This is great! It's clear there was a lot of attention to both of the characters. I really love the initial Kayla reaction and the mothers action on 140-150.

It would be even better if the resolution was a bit better.

Gaucelm De Villaret

On the right path, but her movements feel a bit too jerky and programmed...