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A special kind of mother
by Bachi
Description
A very special mother giving some alcohol tips to her daughter
Comments
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Gaucelm De Villaret
Bad rhythm... Doesn't quite match the momentum of the dialogue... Lacks expression...
Marcella D.
The movements could be improved on
John
When your characters stop moving, it looks like they turn into statues.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Tavius Cousar
The background is a little issue in this animation. The movements of both the rigs need to flow more instead of them moving and then stopping instantly. The lip sync also needs improvement.