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Is there alcohol _ March 2016

by Arpitashah

Final Rating: 3.04. Finished #232 out of 310 entries.

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Animator

Arpitashah

Experience

fresher

Time Taken

7 days

Description

Is there alcohol _ March 2016

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Good idea for the closeups... However, just concentrating in the heads hardly lends to expressions... It's nice you do some play on the eyebrows, but it feels weird/unfocused rather than expressive... And this last expression is just unfittingly odd.

Craig Joseph Massa

The mother's facial expressions were a bit... creepy. Something seemed off I can't really pin it. Mouth sync was a bit off at times as well.

Marcella D.

This animation has a weird movement

Fernando Incetta

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.