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Neighborhood Stakeout

by Rachael Chiarella

Final Rating: 3.95. Finished #123 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

3 Months

Time Taken

2 Weeks

Description

There's nothing like a little mother/daughter bonding time with some spy gear.

Comments

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Steve Schwartz

Those feet are solidly planted the whole shot, like she's glued there. I would get them moving a bit more, like if she readjusted herself or something.

Thomas Holcombe

Nice idea

Fernando Incetta

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.

[user]

I don't know what's going on here and I want to know.

Gaucelm De Villaret

So, um, yeah, the set-up gives it simple actions... but even in this, it is still kinda stiff and lacks expression...