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Sweet 16

by Zachary Lindemann

Final Rating: 3.96. Finished #122 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

Three Years

Time Taken

Three Weeks

Description

A mother gives her daughter an inappropriate gift

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Has some nice setup, but could use more flexibility and expression in what you have.

Lechard P

I'm very confused by the lighting

Connor Leuck

This would be much better with more emotion added to the face and reactions to dialogue.

Marcella D.

Not bad

Fernando Incetta

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.