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That Ain't Cola

by Lauren Elizabeth MacColl

Final Rating: 5.38. Finished #33 out of 310 entries.

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Experience

5 years, BA Hons, Flash *aaaahh aaaahhhh!!*

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

A dorky teen girl wonders if her mum is off the wagon again.

Comments

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Gaucelm De Villaret

Kudos for the full inking and colorization. This is kinda the style for a "mature audience" animated show of the kind you'd see in the 90s MTV days... Doesn't always lend itself well to expression, though... This is more of an appearance-over-content case.

Hugh Langlands-Bell

Love the style, very Ren and Stimpy

Steve Schwartz

I love seeing your shots. I really like the daughter but the mom's head volume shrinks when she moves into profile view a bit and it's a little distracting. Well played over all though!

John Michael Wilyat

Nice!

Marcella D.

Very unique

Isaac Holzwarth

Haha, I like this one!

Richard Adams

Oookay...this is bizarre...but it mostly works.

Fernando Incetta

Crazy style! It reminded me of MTV in the 90's. It needs some refinement but it has a lot of charm. Good job.