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Motherly Love
A girl suspects she's been given an adult beverage.
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Georgeanna Clark
mouth seems off right at the end, other then that great
Ramon Arango
It would help if you offset some movements to eachother, like hands to head, chest to head etc. because right now I really feel the 'pose to pose' which makes it a bit stiff. Humans dont move things with exactly the same timing. Also the transitions between the poses are very linear and stiff. try to get more interesting breakdowns
Marcella D.
Not Bad.
John
I can tell you put a lot of work into this, but lip sync could've used some more work. To me, it didn't look like it matched up with the audio and there were a couple spots where the mouth or cheeks jumped a little. ( Like from frame 159 and 160 for example)
Hacho
shows a little too much teeth in lip sync...
Sabrina Winkel
Why is the background blurry?!
Gaucelm De Villaret
This is almost smooth enough, but the movements have some stiffness and stereotype in them that kinda prevent it from reaching heights.
Bokang Koatja
Ahh... Other than the lipsync I think its working really well. Also the mom's wrist looks broken. You're bending it too far :) Nice job!
Connor Leuck
This is very nice! The shoulders seem raised a bit too high at times though.
Fernando Incetta
Nice posing and body language, specially with hands. It still needs some refining but it's a solid piece anyways. Congratulations.
Coleton McMillan
The movement and facial expressions are extremely well done. The only part that lacks fluidity is the lip sync. Tightening up and smoothing out the lips would help along with not over exaggerating the words. Overall nice animation just not quite complete.
Chad Cox
Mother's lipsync is solid at the beginning, but seems off where she says house, the "how" mouthshape seems too early.