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Any Alcohol?
A girl tries to hide the fact that she cooks using alcohol.
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Karl Bernhardt
I like the movements, especially the end pose. The acting's nice and so is the animation (a little stop-starty but I even get that sometimes) when she says "what kind of mother do you think I am" i feel like you could have put more expression into it.
John Michael Wilyat
Very swimmy. Try creating a workflow that helps you keep your poses snappy and clear. Right now it looks like when you changed the curves to splines it just became soup. Nice staging!
Marcella D.
So-so
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.





