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Alcoholic Soup
by Julian Tan
A girl is curious if her soup contains alcohol.
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Maryline Chemoula
It's hard to concentrate on the animation when Bonnie is ....sparkling that way. I love Mery but her elbow seems a little too high when she points at her soup.I also think she reacts too quickly at he end. I also love Bonnie but the hands needs more work . Keep it up !
Marcella D.
The light is a bit of a distraction, but the characters flow very nicely.
Gaucelm De Villaret
Fitting enough. Good enough angles. It has the right idea, but it kinda lacks in energy and finesse.
Fernando Incetta
Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Good luck.
Monica Stringer
pretty decent animation, well timed and expressive. The lip sync doesn't really work well near the end for the daughter and that could probably be tightened up a bit.