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Stephen's 11 Second Animation
by Stephem
Description
My participation in this month's competition is to understand what stage my level is. This is my first time to participate in this competition. I hope to learn and get some good reviews to improve my animation level. Thank you all!
Comments
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Hadas Rosen
The guy's breathing is distracting me from the actual guy talking, so make sure to think about staging! The floating head could be more punchy, but you're beginning to get the accents!
Fred
His head should follow his shoulders more, not go in the opposite direction. There is too much offset/drag. His torso would be expanding with each breath.