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last encounter
by chanchal roy
Description
A souldier is taking his last breath and he capsize his own fate, this scene is taking place in europe territory.
Comments
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Hadas Rosen
The gun has no weight, and there isn't much happening with their expressions. Keep fleshing it out and punch things up a bit! The scenario's fun and you're getting somewhere, but it needs more work.
Diego Fernando Vargas
Fine