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11 seconds_march
İ am a student. it ıs my first 11 seconds movie clip.
20 hours
Hey, i am a student and i need so long, because i have not so much expıerence in animation with keyframes. So it looks a bit slow. and i dont get the 11 seconds perfectly. :)
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Melanie Corrales
Lighting and scene are done nicely. I'm a bit confused as to what the story is actually about -- I think simplifying your story or giving more indicators as to whats happening with your character animation could really help push your story and animation overall. Good work!
John Alston
You can feel the deadline here. I think the lighting changes seem inorganic, and the film looks like it's designed to end before the end of the sound bite.