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Ghost girl
by Ryan Shin
A short rough animation of a sketch of a ghost girl lamenting her last words
(Poor planning resulted in only a rough sketch with no lip sync >.>)
Comments
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Richard Adams
The body mechanics and acting is excellent. Wish there was facial animation and lip syncing to go with it.
Ana Flávia
although it doesn't have eyes, we can tell exactly what it is feeling! great job (:
Joshua
Good movement and command of line control, but I do wonder why the drawing is so basic?
It's not a problem if you didn't have time, you got the basic motions out, but this feels very underdeveloped due to the lack of drawing detail, and no facial emotion.
Hasan Alaydrus
I just hope you make the face too
John Alston
This feels oddly like an "Animation School, year one" pre-viz animatic whipped together when one knows the professors have a hint of leniency. The tadpole/ghost movement before the dialog is the best part.
And there are no lips to sync.
Renxu
Even with no lipsing or face expression, she cleary is ashamed about it