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Caught cake-handed!
by Felicia F.
Caught in the act of stealing another's cake, will her co-worker expose her devious crime?
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Arturo Arias
Great idea, sad you got no more time to polish enough.
Danny Kneip
Nicely set up and performed. The over-the-cupcake angle at 289 is interesting - the cupcake is frozen in space through most of the animation. A bit of movement, especially when he pulls the cherry off the top could have worked nicely. The lip sync is good.
Jesse J. Jones
Need to study body mechanics. Arms and shoulders don't usually move on their own without the body moving as well. The turn around is quite poppy as well. Keep practicing, there's some good ideas here, they just need a little refining! :)
Clement
You have the ideas, the technique is bit behind. Keep up the work, and you'll be a good story-teller