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I am Right!

by Dillin Morentin

Final Rating: 2.42. Finished #153 out of 167 entries.

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Animator

Dillin Morentin

Experience

1 term at MHCC

Time Taken

2 weeks

Description

two people talk about being right.

Comments

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Nathan Greensmith

Good gestures on the male character. Movements are a bit slow and floaty.

Eric Raffle

you need to hold certain poses more and you need to find tutorials on YouTube because you are not doing the speech correctly

Francisca Zamorano

expresiveless :C

Hanne Dewachter

Well, I think you need a little improvement in the sip sync area. It looks like your characters are just going "bababa", the mouths don't change shape. And you don't need to move the mouth that much on every sound they make. Oh, and don't forget that your characters have a whole body that can move, not just their limbs. But keep practicing!