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TRAINING
by James Trimm
...Always two there are; no more, no less. A master and an apprentice.
Comments
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Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty
great body movement and soft hidden anticipation available in the video.
Nassim Briedj
good one
Liam
Great scene setup, you've obviously put a lot of work into this. Unfortunately there seems to be a lot of stuttering and popping in his movements while he's sitting in the chair, which make it very hard to read what he's actually doing. I'd recommend taking the time to smooth those out before worrying about your rendering.
Jordan Lewers
I almost thought this was your reference; it's so beautiful and smooth! I really would've preferred if the character were closer to the camera so we could really appreciate the subtlety
Zachary Polic
i feel like i'd give this a better rating if the composition was closer. I can hardly see what he's doing... looks good, but can't really tell
Luis Eduardo Vallejo
i think that the camara can be more closer
Sergio Candela Ramirez
good job with the first part of the shot, but I believe the second part needs more movement :)
Shakya Achyut
This is wonderful! I really like the character small shaking movements that shows his personality
Lucy Acland
Great character animation, but I feel like it needs to be closer.





