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Your Dancing Mister

by MC

Final Rating: 3.33. Finished #101 out of 205 entries.

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Animator

MC

Experience

6 months. Currently a student.

Time Taken

30 hours?

Description

Who is that man stalking the school hallways? It's... your DANCING MISTER!

Critiques really appreaciated!

Comments

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Joshua Farmer

lighting is a little much. animation is a little swimmy

Kendra Kaye Coffey

animation was pretty good but the lighting seemed off for the scene. seemed more like the kind of lighting you would see around a campfire and less like indoor florescent lighting.

Spencer Barber

the last shot with "your dancing master" was my favorite part, I just felt a lack of weight...

Riley Thompson

watch your lighting, it gets really dark towards the end, also it would be really nice to see the momentum run through his body a bit more after he slams his foot down.