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Your Dancing Mister
by MC
Who is that man stalking the school hallways? It's... your DANCING MISTER!
Critiques really appreaciated!
Comments
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Joshua Farmer
lighting is a little much. animation is a little swimmy
Kendra Kaye Coffey
animation was pretty good but the lighting seemed off for the scene. seemed more like the kind of lighting you would see around a campfire and less like indoor florescent lighting.
Spencer Barber
the last shot with "your dancing master" was my favorite part, I just felt a lack of weight...
Riley Thompson
watch your lighting, it gets really dark towards the end, also it would be really nice to see the momentum run through his body a bit more after he slams his foot down.





