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Dancing Master
by Erin Goddard
Description
Child runs in late for a lesson.
Comments
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Lauren Hammond
I like the master's fancy bow at the end and the boy's entrance is fun, but overall the characters are moving too much, and all the acting sort of melts together and becomes confusing. Studying some live-action reference may help you get a better sense of timing and holds :)
Timothy Muller
Hi there. My advice for you is to strengthen your contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep the good work up. Cheers!