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He's Dying.

by Ethan Stanley

Final Rating: 4.23. Finished #87 out of 185 entries.

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Animator

Ethan Stanley

Experience

I've taken 1 semester of character animation at a community college

Time Taken

8-10 hours in total

Description

He's got some stuff he's working through.

Comments

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Lucky Brown

His body is too stiff, he needs more movementy on his body and some small animation on his arms/hands.

Ruben Uggla

I think the animation would be better if his body moved along with the head instead of it being just the head moving. I do however think that the mouth movement were practically perfect.

Rebecca M. Wheatley

His body needs some animation. Even though he's leaned over on his arms, his body will still shift as his head moves around.