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Why a baker?
Description
A therapy session.
Comments
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Ruben Uggla
I think the overall speed is a bit to quick. Other than that, good. I don't know how long you've been doing this but you clearly have a lot of potential.
Tiffany Chao
The facial expressions of the guy lying down is fairly symmetrical and could use more squash and stretch. I liked the shoulder animation as it was timely and matched the dialogue
Laurent Châtellier
You have got a strange composition with the angle of the room drawing too much attention. (Check the web for the "rule of thirds")