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Dying...?
by Aniko Hasko
A zombie and a frankenstein monster speaking in a bakery crematory.
Comments
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Wai Han Lau
A good effort and I like the character designs! However, there's too little movement in the rest of the body beside the face. Have a look at how people move: when you're on the street, when you're watching a film, wherever. Keep going!
Lucky Brown
Would be better with some body movement,
Richard Adams
Both characters are very well drawn, lots of appeal. I like your style. Main problem is so much of both characters is so static, nothing moving except mouth, eyebrows, eyes. You'd do better with simpler drawings but every line moves in every frame.
Jacinta Joe
You should try some body animations to make it more interesting.