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Baker
by Bri
Description
Crap jobs!!!
Comments
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Clarissa Addington
Blocking/key poses look good, just needs a bit more flushed out/smoothing work and I think it'll look great!
Rafael Di Pietro
good poses but it's still in blocking phase.
Ruben Uggla
Most of the moves are the characters quickly taking a pose and holding it. If there was more movement when they have reached their pose the characters would probably feel more alive. For example when the baker moves her hands, they should wobble a bit instead of just being completely frozen.
Laurent Châtellier
why a woman's rig for a male voice ?





