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Canned soldiers
by Roland Nagy
Description
Two tired soldiers talking in a trench.
Comments
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Wai Han Lau
very cool concept! Although, I feel the soldiers are very stiff. Also, the first soldier's collar bone seems to jump about around frame 31. I suggest looking at actors in film and seeing how people move. Very good effort though, keep practicing!
Jim deMello
Good art style, but almost little to no movement in this.
Ethan Stanley
There was obviously a lot of work and heart put into this. The lip sync looks a bit off though, maybe just move the song byte up a few frames up. Again, great work!





