Derek's got some advice.

Paula Decanini

There was no emotion or expression conveyed in this. The character looks nice, but nothing really happened.

Reginald Crumpler

Okay lip sync. Needed a bit more movement of the body.

Filipe Pedrosa

The biggest problem is that I cannot tell the story behind the animation. No idea how the dialogue relates to what you did.

I like the bunny slippers and the dog's pose, it has potential for character. Just remember to consider the story, the context, when you animate/draw anything.

Alex Sinclair

The art style has promise, but the animation is too static to support it.