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A Piece of Advice
by Jake Embry
A character describes a piece of advice he will be giving to somebody.
Comments
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Cory Parks
The cuts are a little jarring and it's a little unclear what's going on. I think you can keep the camera in the second position for the whole shot and the story would make a lot more sense. We don't even need to see another character. Keep going! DT ftw!
Richard Carrillo
Who is upset?
Alex Sinclair
The camera doesn't completely focus on the character, the lip-sync is just his mouth repeatedly moving up and down, and overall there doesn't seem to be much of a motivation for the character talking.
Reginald Crumpler
Nice camera work.
Eleftherios Kokkinakis
Everything seems logical.. The table in the black background, the blue light on the character. The fact that he is talking to himself but he is pointing at the empty chair.. :p
Jyrki Kanto
It would be better to have the camera get closer to the character instead of moving past the table.