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Not THIS again, Dad!

by Mariana Avila

Final Rating: 3.63. Finished #149 out of 238 entries.

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Animator

Mariana Avila

Experience

Student, beginner (around 4 months)

Time Taken

Roughly 10 hours

Description

Angry guy is not open to advice from his dad... Especially since it's always the exact same phrase.

Final project for introduction to animation class.

Comments

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Cordelia Garcia

WOOWW NICE CAR!

Jez

LOL i'd bet you were going to get some comment about your animation especially first sec. ...but anyway who is upset now ...ha ha

Richard Carrillo

Haha very funny! made me smile :)
The animation could be improved tho
GJ!

Janzelle

Very interesting and nice body language

Reginald Crumpler

Work on it.

Jesse Angri

I think you're trying to have Norman reacting to an off-camera speaker. It's a great idea, but it doesn't read here. If you could work on your fundamentals and make this read better, this could be a really good piece! Maybe give us some clue that there's another speaker here. If I've completely misinterpreted this piece, I apologize.

Katie Wyman

I like the concept a lot, I can see really clearly what's going on in this scene. You should check in future how to properly render out frames. I can tell this was recorded directly off your computer screen through the program. The car moves nicely and I like the key poses you're working with. Try in future to flow more smoothly between them.