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The decision
Inside the dressing room of this place is something wrong.
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Ben LaScala
It really hard to see but from what I can see it looks good!
Lizeth Acosta Orjuela
i like it a lot!!! the guy who's talking is amazing :)
Paula Decanini
I'm not sure what was going on here, but there was some good silhouettes.
Reginald Crumpler
Loved this! Very creative and expressive, just work on better visuals to convey the dialogue.
Richard Carrillo
Very very nice animation, only I feel it's too much movement for this dialogue.
Tobias Fuhr
crazy stuff but i liked...
Blond
nice animation style
JONG H. GOH
I like the style of your drawings. animation seems good, too. But the background staging is not clearly done, which makes me replay between 1st & 2nd shot - then I realised what's going on. I think maybe you could've colour the background only, with only some selection of colour. then make the lines thicker on the chars.(and fill the char colour with black & white) then the char & BG would be more distinguished.
Amartya Mukherji
Oh.. Mind-blowing.. Super stuff.
Doing this in 2D,- means a lot of professional experience are behind these stokes
Only the 180 degree camera switch is a bit disturbing to the eye.
Edy Zet
Good to see a different type of animation. Way too cool, still needs polishing
Katie Wyman
Very nice over-exadurated movement of the characters. It works well because you keep their proportions in check. Just be careful with that shot change at the end, I think you broke the 180 degree rule which makes things a bit confusing.