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well thought out
A father talking straight to the eyes of his teenager son.
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Mariana Avila
Animation is really good, but the scenario is kinda dull in comparison.
Paula Decanini
Mustache stroking is good. Doesn't hit the emphasis on "bit", and hits too hard on "never".
Diane Aarts
nice
Luis Trebino
too many poses
Alex Sinclair
The overall animation is quite good, though that face he holds at the end kinda rubs me the wrong way...
hamid
what is the story ?
Janzelle
Really nice! I love how fluid the motion is. The motion and details for how he handles his glasses are really nice.
Amartya Mukherji
lip sync is off, - specially at the end section.
Interesting animation though
Richard Carrillo
Why the smile?
Katie Wyman
Some people might say that the character was over animated, but that's entirely a stylistic choice. Personally I really like it! What you have flows really nicely, and the way your character's body moves between gestures looks really natural. The lighting is also very good. I do feel like your character's personality changed a lot through the shot. Weather that was deliberate or not I don't know, but you should make sure that was a conscious choice when animating him.